The world we live in today makes us who we are. They place,way,how and etc. how you grow up made you who you are today. The people who you grew up with and what you did made you who your are. It shaped your decision making process. And the decisions you make make you who you are. Just like in the some Pennsylvania town called Roseta the people lived so long on the decisions and feelings they had from those decisions from there sense of family.
I think I get where you are going with this, but try to relate it more directly/obviously. Explain what the sociological idea is and then relate it to an experience from your own life. Also - be careful of the writing. There tells wHERE? HERE or tHERE? Get it? Their tells whose it is - is it mIne? Is it I? Or is it theIrs?
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